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First, let me tell you something...It isn't really a tournament It's just my main FC fighting other FC to Death.
I won't be a godmodd and make my main FC win all the time.. I got to be Fair and be equal and search the my opponents Battle, Armor, and Skill to determine who will win This DEathBattle! lol
No but seriously...I will do that.
Joon Belongs to: :iconjoonth:
Bar Belongs to: :iconbar-kun:
Flame Belongs to: :iconxxflamethewolfxx:
Merlow Belongs to: :icondestructionseries:

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Song: ''The core'' Sonic riders zero gravity
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:icontytrun:
my first critique to you.
maybe not.
oh well.
lol.

Vision: it was good and very intriguing, though it didn't really give real specifics on what was going on till the very end or if you looked at the title. gotta work on that.

originality: :iconmehplz:meh. There are so many tournaments that are like this. I just think that seeing a bunch of random characters that people know standing around(okay maybe i'm going over the top with saying "standing around") doing something like sleeping, charging up their lazha(laser), or just posing isn't really... i don't know... motivating.... maybe try showing how to make it a letter was sent to those contestants about the tournament and whenever they cross they must fight or something no matter where or when. storyline to it, not just random fighting lol.
needs work.

Technique: could've been better... i expected a lot more then what i saw especially coming from you. for example, more sprites for the movement of better scenes to show how Awesome and Bodacious the animation will be. and I can understand the lack of sprites for characters but come on... you can do WAY better. I KNOW you can.

Impact: wasn't really wanting to watch the animation in full but at the same time i do. it needs more extremes to make the audiences blood get flowing, ya know what ah mean?:iconfearmeplz: some chills. something to make the crowd go,"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH!!! that's gotta hurt" or "NOOO!!! sonic!!! don't give up!!!" ya know?
otherwise after watching this it made me feel like this is gonna be great but nothing more.... you can do a LOT better bro.


my review maybe harsh, but that's only because you're getting better and getting close to me which means harsher reviews.
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galickGUNNNN Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
awesome! can't wait till it comes out Raichu la plz 
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Ask-HypaTheWolf Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Dat Battle Yo. If my sheet was done I would be all like "Let me be on your team 2 on 4 lmao. But still. Nice. "icongoofygrinplz: :iconfuckyeaplz: :iconawesomefaceplz:
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Mario0o896 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
the yellow one is a recolour
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Tortwag Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
#sees first image...# WHAT?! MERLOW?!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!

Looking good yeah, keep it up:D can't wait to see those fightss.
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MesPaintTH Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yep,
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Scrap-of-metal Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Looking good Mast!
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MesPaintTH Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks, Although it needs more work.
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Scrap-of-metal Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thats true, and by the looks of things, you don't have much of a sheet for Master am I right?
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MesPaintTH Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
yes, Im still working on it.
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Scrap-of-metal Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I might be able to help but it would take time since I have school an shit.
But if you want, I can help.
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